“If I had more time, I would have written a shorter letter.”
In The Atlantic article “The Needless Complexity of Academic Writing“, the author Victoria Clayton critiques opaque writing that infects academic journals. She writes that the prose is “riddled with professional jargon and needlessly complex syntax… even someone with a Ph.D. can’t understand a fellow Ph.D.’s work unless he or she comes from the very same discipline.” This critique could easily be applied to legal writing, including some factums and judicial decisions.
Clayton explains that the main reason for opaque writing may not be so sinister. She . . . [more] “Why Is Legal Writing So Complex?”